After the Crit

I left my crit today feeling slightly disenchanted.  I'm not really happy with my form, which seems to come across as a shrouded series of boxes, so i worked on trying to "unpack" the boxes to discover the interior spaces behind the exterior intersections, which Nuno said would be quite interesting.  I admit, my original way of doing this has been quite elementary, simply curving the interior walls, but its a good starting point.  I also want to look at my circulation a little because it hasnt really been looked at.

But first, this is an example of the curved walls which I have been looking at, but even now, I know it needs more work.